Though intriguing, this doesn't follow assignment instructions.The first line should concentrate on ONE PORTION of the whole thing you've identified in your title. You also want to pay attention to syllables. Notice that the first line is 12 syllables (5 + 7 or akin to the first two lines of a haiku).The second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor. Notice that the second line is 7 syllables long.
Very deep and majestic. Are you talking about the meadow or a person ?
ReplyDeleteThough intriguing, this doesn't follow assignment instructions.The first line should concentrate on ONE PORTION of the whole thing you've identified in your title.
ReplyDeleteYou also want to pay attention to syllables. Notice that the first line is 12 syllables (5 + 7 or akin to the first two lines of a haiku).The second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor. Notice that the second line is 7 syllables long.